2013年11月6日 星期三

Willie wrote a Position Paper and a Draft Resolution

I wrote a Position Paper and a Draft Resolution regarding the African Food crisis. MUN students can read my papers and see how I have written them. I hope they will help you understand what should be included in your papers.

Here is my position paper. Perhaps students want to read this in order to gain ideas for their own papers.
Position Paper
Committee: ECOSOC
Issue: The Food Crisis in Africa
Country: Angola (Willie McGuire)
       
        The United Nations must work to uphold basic human rights for all people. Among these rights is a standard of well-being that includes food, clothing, housing, and medical care. Food and shelter are basic needs for human beings. The continent of Africa is home to many of the world's poorest countries, and the current food crisis threatens people every day. 2011 saw the worst African drought in over 60 years. Climate change is speeding up the desertification of land. Many other factors add to the food shortage, including poor use of water and resources, a lack of organization, social instability, wars, and political corruption. While there is no simple answer to correcting all these problems, the delegate of Angola believes that careful planning, peace-making, and cooperation can create a solid foundation for building a sustainable and abundant culture of food production in Africa.
        Angola is located in the southwest part of central Africa, on the Atlantic coast. The nation became an independent republic in 1975, after a civil war. Prior to that time, the country had been considered a colony of Portugal for about 500 years. Although Angola is rich in mineral resources and agricultural commodities, many of our citizens still suffer from poverty, hunger, and disease. Like some other countries in Africa, Angola's famine is largely due to the fact that our society is not peaceful. Our politicians have repeatedly abused their power and authority, our people are divided and often at war with one another, and our economic policies are not fair to the average worker. Though we produce and export a lot of food, our agricultural policies seem to be aimed at short-term economic gain rather than food production and long-term sustainability, and many of our people still suffer from hunger.
        There are many groups that work to prevent hunger in Africa, and yet the problem remains. Angola's representative to the Food and Agriculture Organization of the UN (FAO), Mamoudou Diallo, made public statements about the food crisis on World Food Day, October 16. He said that ending hunger and poverty are primary goals of the Angolan government, and that supporting cooperative efforts will be important for increasing the food supply. Angola is ready and willing to help solve this problem in our country and in the rest of Africa.
        The FAO recently published an article on the importance of indigenous and aboriginal cultures. The article explained that traditional farming, herding, and hunting practices of indigenous cultures tend to protect biodiversity and forests. We ought to learn from these people. Environmentalists from Angola have criticized deforestation as a threat to the environment as well as a threat to traditional cultures. While large-scale commercial farming often thrives on deforestation, it seems that sustainable food production and culture demands the diversity of forests and the ability of herders to move and roam with their crops.
        To solve the problem of hunger in Africa, many actions must be initiated. It is necessary to support the cooperation of NGOs and environmental groups that protect against desertification and deforestation. These groups must work hand-in-hand with agricultural support groups who can educate farmers on resource management and help provide public spaces where livestock can move freely, without destroying the soil. Assistance in the form of food donations, access to water, seeds, and money must also be given to the countries in need, but we must do so in a way that doesn't harm the local economies; perhaps giving stamps or tickets to responsible farmers which they can exchange for seeds and farming supplies. These supplies can be paid for at a fair price through donations. Additionally, we must provide protection for indigenous cultures and learn about the sustainability of their ways.
        The problem of the food crisis cannot be fixed from the top going downward. Indeed, we must work from the bottom and go up. The base of society must be peaceful and stable in order to build and organize an effective community. So, in resolving the African food crisis, the UN should focus not only on food, the environment, and agriculture, but also on social stability and peaceful relations. We should send in groups of diplomats to encourage social harmony, economic equality, and opportunities for improvement. We must encourage politicians to end corruption and stop the wars. We must work hard to end despair and violence in society, so that people are ready to cooperate and work towards long-term goals that can bring food to people now and in the future.

The Draft Resolution should be written as one continuous sentence. The clauses in the preamble should end with comma, and the operative clauses end with semi-colon; except for the final clause, which ends with a period. The words that introduce clauses in the preamble should be in italics, and the words that introduce operative clauses should be underlined.


Draft Resolution
Committee: ECOSOC
Issue: The Food Crisis in Africa
Submitter: Angola (Willie McGuire)


THE ECONOMIC AND SOCIAL COUNCIL,

Noting with deep concern the great amount of suffering and despair resulting from famine in Africa,

Observing the complex and numerous causes of the food crisis, including drought, desertification, war, political corruption, poor resource management, and social instability,

Pointing out that giving food to the poor could negatively affect food prices and local economies,

Believing that peace and stability are primary and necessary goals in creating an abundant society,


1.     Recommends that the UN send peace-makers into Africa to settle regional disputes;

2.     Proposes the creation of an educational network to research, develop, and spread education       regarding the best agricultural practices for a sustainable food supply, reversing desertification,      careful use of water, restoration of traditional farming practices, and environmental protection,     which may include:

                A) the development of new trade schools and/or educational outreach programs for                  spreading the best agricultural crops and techniques,

                B) a cooperative effort between local governments and UN organizations, such as:
                        i) The UN Commission for Sustainable Development,
                        ii) The UN Environment Program,
                        iii) The UN Educational, Scientific, and Cultural Organization,
                        iv) The UN Convention to Combat Desertification,
                        v) The Food and Agriculture Organization;
               
3.    Requests a careful examination of the distribution of funding and foreign aid in Africa, so as to   ensure positive economic growth that will not negatively influence food prices or local trade;

4.     Further recommends the development of a new system for sharing and distributing food,       money, and aid from NGOs and foreign nations, which includes, but is not limited to:

                A) the distribution of food stamps, rather than food, which can be used to purchase                         food and can allow local food prices to remain stable,
       
                B) the free distribution of agricultural supply stamps, which can be exchanged for                         farming supplies, seeds, and other materials that are produced locally or which have                     been donated through aid from foreign countries, so as to benefit farmers without                     harming local suppliers,

                C) the creation of food and agricultural stamp offices, which will exchange money for                      the stamps from farmers and merchants whose products were bought through the                        program;

5.     Encourages greater effort in bringing clean water systems to Africans, and cooperation    between the NGOs that share this common goal;


6.     Calls for stronger protection of forests, bio-diverse lands, and indigenous African cultures,         through a variety of means including, but not limited to:

                A) an immediate halt to the seizure and development of wild forests and indigenous                     lands in Africa,

                B) active review of the UN Declaration of the Rights of Indigenous People,
                        i) clarifying and amending the UN's definition of "indigenous people", especially                       those in Africa,
                        ii) identifying the nomadic, pastoral, and hunting cultures that still exist in                                 present-day Africa, in both drylands and forests,

                C) the use of military force to protect fragile ecosystems and indigenous people's lands,

                D) rapid negotiations with local governments to ensure protection of indigenous lands                      and vital wildlife areas;

7.     Suggests the creation of new farming assistance policies that best utilize foreign aid and         promote environmental health, in cooperation with local governments, such as, but not limited       to:
               
                A) sharing well-managed public land among farmers and herders of livestock,

                B) using and the best possible seeds and areas of land to develop healthy grasslands that               can combat desertification and give livestock a place to graze,

                C) implementing efficient water-management systems in farming communities, and                         subsidizing workers who create these systems,

                D) subsidizing the payment of farm-workers to help increase profits f

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